I really like you content and double page spread (moving towards proficiency/excellence in some areas), however there are a number of improvements you could make to your practical work in order to hit/exceed your target grade. Targets: 1) Change the typography choice and wording of the Q&A subtitle on your double page spread. 2) Complete your cover. 3) Change the text layout on your cover. 4) Change typography choices on the two stories on the left of your cover. 5) Change the position and size of the barcode.
I really like you content and double page spread (moving towards proficiency/excellence in some areas), however there are a number of improvements you could make to your practical work in order to hit/exceed your target grade.
ReplyDeleteTargets:
1) Change the typography choice and wording of the Q&A subtitle on your double page spread.
2) Complete your cover.
3) Change the text layout on your cover.
4) Change typography choices on the two stories on the left of your cover.
5) Change the position and size of the barcode.